Excitement was growing as they searched
for their very first house
how long they had struggled to save
for the large deposit
a new estate was being built nearby
for a mortgage keen to apply!
Decided to go down to the site and view
a show homes was built
ready for customers to peruse around
it was late in the evening
so staff were getting ready to go home
but hoped they could roam!
The manager was present happily agreed
being muddy boots provided
took them to the show house by a stream
still mainly fields and trees
had a rural yet somehow unpleasant feel
the open space was an appeal!
But the couple could see she was anxious
and not keen to stay
this made them ask her what was wrong
reluctantly she spoke
but continued the tour of the real estate
their worries did not alleviate!
Standing in the large bedroom told them
that on her first day
came to this part as the base was laid
hearing a voice glanced
towards the sound saw somebody there
a shadowy shape was aware!
The couple stood fascinated by what she said
even the temperature dropped
it seemed to them not feeling comfortable
being born in the area
there are always stories told about places
often recalling friends faces!
Her best friend had disappeared in the field
that the estate was now on
at first I thought it was her spirit watching
we had been warned to go
but when you are young you see no danger
or the fear then in a stranger!
It was not the humans you had to really dread
around the stream monsters
lurked ready to steal those daring to tread
and back to their domain
snatch the innocent young never seen again
only their lost souls would remain!
Odd noises could be heard wanted to leave
making excuses tried to get out
but outside the front door several shadows
blocked their exit route
behind them came the strange sales lady
who had become very shady!
But tonight I will take anybody with me
it was a shape shifter
becoming a frightening freakish creature
attacking them both
as the workmen came to start their shift
not seeing two more souls adrift!
Those who knew the area kept well clear
evil still dwelled here!
the manager was back the following day
same polite manner on display!
Nothing more was heard of the couple!
The Foureyed Poet.
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