The middle-aged couple looked over the ocean
on the deck of the cruise liner
enjoying the warm beautiful Caribbean sunset
sipping a fruity red wine
unaware of the creature crawling up the side
for them nowhere to hide!
Leaving a slime trail it slithered over the rail
down onto the empty deck
silently approaching the contented couple
opening its jaws wide
now exposing large angled razor-sharp teeth
death came from beneath!
There was no time to give any warning cry
the man savaged and swallowed
the woman violently knocked overboard
unable to make a sound
falling to more sea monsters basking below
her blood no longer did flow!
Unaware of the nearing danger passengers
slept or partied as normal
the captain still on duty pacing the bridge
viewing the radar at the blips
wondering what was causing this oddity
then not knowing their ferocity!
Rare thinking a schooling of fish were passing
not for long as reports came in
of monstrous creatures swarming the ship
attacking everybody on all levels
immediately sending out an urgent Mayday call
before their end did befall!
But for a twist of fate the message was delayed
was it the position on the sea
or an electrical storm that distorted the signal
by the time any rescue arrived
no life remained upon this passenger vessel
a mystery searchers had to wrestle!
Now classed a crime scene the ship was towed
from its very remote last position
but underneath the hull these creatures gripped
with powerful suckers undetected
into the main sea port ready to unleash their terror
that would become a shocking error!
The nightmare had just begun!
The Foureyed Poet.
Sounds like a best selling novel.
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Can I go back to where I’m sitting on deck admiring the sunset?
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I love the way u made the end rhyme a style not usual. The poem reminds me of a mix of titanic and jaws lol, rellick was right when he said it sounds like a novel
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The sea monsters were waiting for their victims! The Foureyed Poet.
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