The Old Asylum!

The old asylum was an eerie looking place

stark against the angry autumn skyline

ominous and bleak an air of  such doom

the team stood together looking with terror

five floors of  an unspeakable dread

it’s said haunted by spirits of the dead!


Like in an old movie the doors creaked open

cautiously they entered feeling a chill

the owner who should have met them here

came the week before and disappeared

nervously they stood in the entrance hall

when each heard a pleading female call!


With trepidation they brought in their equipment

a layout plan in their hands exploration began

five floors of dark dank empty corridors and wards

they split into three groups to cover the ground

daylight in places was poor torches had to be used

creating fear in their minds making them confused!


Shadowy figures seemed every where they turned

and footsteps heard they did not feel alone

they could not wait for the search had to begin

more uncertainty than there had been before

their lead investigator Tom picked up his case

and said let’s go this is the best area for base!


Parts of this decaying place were unsafe to walk in

special areas that were thought of as haunted

now had to be the priority for each of the groups

though everywhere was certainly not safe to be

team A went up to the distant top fifth floor

as they arrived they heard a slamming door!


Screams could be heard down the long corridor

as the temperature rapidly began to drop

before they were set up movements were seen

a presence made them just want to run

they had under estimated what was actually here

in the dim light they now knew real fear!


Alone on the top floor the small band of three

had come to regret the horrors they could see

the journey for all of them had only just started

could they escape or become dearly departed?


Group A was trapped what will happen to them

and the others in The Old Asylum?

The Foureyed Poet.

Published in: on 22/02/2010 at 13:00  Comments (2)  

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  1. Reblogged this on The Foureyed Poet and commented:

    The asylum was waiting for them! The Foureyed Poet.


  2. Reblogged this on The Foureyed Poet and commented:

    The asylum was waiting for them! The Foureyed Poet.


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